gay and fake lol
Shit, I gotta start drawing some of the freaky shit I dream
At least by my dream standards this was rather tame, but I still had the impression it would make a good game concept.
I'm at a loss of words, all I could do was rest my head on my palm and sigh dejectedly.
I assume she'll make him drink that or blind him one eye at a time
I don't find crying girls sexual
Everyone has different tastes i guess....
I have no idea why, but I absolutely love this. Maybe it's my inner childishness.
It's a little too dark- I can't see the details.
It's alright lol. The two major flaws I noticed off-hand was that the face needs a little work(which will solve itself with your eventual practice), and that her right wing(viewer's left) has no view proportion- the Character is in a 3/4s position but the the wings are as if they were in a front view. I believe this is most likely cause you simply copy-pasted. You shouldn't do that unless it isn't obvious.
As for the face- I'll leave out my critique about the skill level since that will only be solved with time. What I will say though is that the character's expression is rather lifeless- blankly staring ahead. You should have at least tried to put some emotion on her face- like a smug smile or a toothy grin.
P.s.I gave the guy below me a nickname. He is Cranky McGrumplestien.
Well, I tried, but thanks for your feedback, and I agree. It's unfortunate that it works that way for me, but I agree. I just wish Kinsei wasn't such a bitch.
oh you, silly internet
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