Spedmallet's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Element Explained: Fiia 1]

Bro, when are you writing the book or drawing the comic?

Seriously man. Seriously.

MarikBentusi responds:

It's actually based on a story (German tho) and I've been thinking about doing a comic one-off. Not sure if I'll be any good at it, but since people are (to my surprise) interested, I'm willing to give it a shot.

I did this multi-parter to gather some feedback like mentioned in the description.

[Flashover]

Absolutely stunning man, but I couldn't help but notice that one hand contains an impossible thumb.

[A Saviour in the Dark - page 1]

I don't think the guy below me follows that this is probably leading to the point where the woman turns around and sticks up for herself, like you imply in the comments.

My only complaint is that the man is excessively cruel and villainous- readers will sympathize with the female protagonist without the guy, say, ripping open a baby and drinking it's blood. I'd suggest toning it down a bit just to be less forced.

JMDeSantis responds:

Well, I won't say too much about the story, but Chadhiyana is not on this page and the title is "A Saviour in the Dark." Strangely, Newgrounds.com is the first website I've posted this on where the responses have been so strong to what is going on in the story. But it was always my intention to really hit people hard with this first page. At least the comments here are letting me know it did what I intended.

[Sonic]

Some things were NOT meant to be painted realistically

what have you done

JoshSummana responds:

Meh ... it needs too be done :P

[Captain Americat]

Not fat enough

SerPounce responds:

If I made him any fatter then his name would be Captain Vito.

Seriously, have you ever met someone named Vito that wasn't fat as fuck?

[Hobbitess]

You did a pretty good job on the coloring and backgrounds, I just wish you'd have taken the time to redo the limbs of the character.

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

Thanks for the fair review. I wish I had too. But I was lazy and didn't think I'd take the picture this far. Aha

[Merry christmas by sonic]

I hope he falls off the roof

[Grand Priestess of Cthulhu]

I really like this, though the back seems a little off.

[green eyes]

This isn't too bad, but it could definitely use some work. Foremost I really feel as though the front of the girl looks detached from the rest of the body. Another thing that bothers me is the general composition of the face; it looks more smushed together rather than at an angle. A few other nitpicks are; the shading seems off at the transition of back to butt(and in general in both those areas), the thighs are a bit too big and the entire waist area is off proportionally.

I think her left arm was done fairly well though.

immaboreddude responds:

THANKS for the observation i will upload it again with som fixes. XD