Spedmallet's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Canoness Superior Obdulia]

My biggest nitpick is that the checkers do not work well in contrast to just about everything, or at least, the amount of brightness they emit.

Rocktopus64 responds:

Touché.
I also find the white intrusive, mostly because of the dark background.
Ah well, next time.

[Mad Ripped pt 10]

Bpremo for greatest artist of this generation

[Mad Ripped pt 3]

THAT RIPPED MO FUCKA JUST RIPPED YO

[''Lappin'']

0/10 tits drawn really bad

Fatelogic responds:

Erm...

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/spedmallet/mary-d-internet-superhero-ine

BWAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Yeah... right...

[Blonic n blackman]

MAGNIFICENCE AT IT'S BEST.

[Black Dragon_Satashi]

Nitpicks:

The right boob (our left) is disproportionate, especially with the position of her right arm (our left)

The left arm and hand is lifeless and floating awkwardly; it does not look like the hand is resting on the waist (or belt- I really can't tell what you wanted) as you intended.

If you want to tell a story that appeals to a wide audience, maybe tone down the breast size and give her a more realistic outfit.

Shoulderline length to hip size is off. Disregard this if the character has a penis.

The score. Pretty bad this one's total is better than all the other pictures you made combined, amirite.

[Black Dragon_Happy Nightmare]

Not bad, but I've got some nitpicks.

Right arm(out left, holding the revolver) is very flat and seems forced.

Upper body, from the collar to the midsection, seems sloppy to me. I think the biggest flaw is the collar's front perspective in contrast to mostly everything else being 3/4s perspective.

Color gradients.