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Cortana and Serina Cortana and Serina

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I like their mutant proportions and down syndrome faces

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Oh, Merlo~ Oh, Merlo~

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

head is really big and wierd

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BluMiu responds:

You think so? I was having a bit of trouble with over the shoulder, so something could have not been scaled

Tastes Like Switch Tastes Like Switch

Rated 0 / 5 stars

cool choking 9 year olds ok

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AthenaRedesign AthenaRedesign

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

here is my original character Murcey. No not steel

Hall of Alfheim promo- Shade Hall of Alfheim promo- Shade

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Hi, I'm back. I'm sorry, leaving you reviews that call you bad at art is the only thing that is keeping me going. Every day I browse the art portal and look for your poorly drawn art so I don't kill myself. Thank you for being the light of my life.

BELLUMART responds:

It's okay sweetie, the posts are here for you...all over your face, neck, and, chest. <3

Hall of Alfheim promo- Noir Hall of Alfheim promo- Noir

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Hey! I'm sorry I triggered you on my last review. I should not be so harsh on your atrocious wrting and mediocre drawing: people don't get into porno if they're good at literally anything else.

I'm sorry I won't offend you anymore

BELLUMART responds:

Welcome back!

Hope, i'm keeping your eyes and thoughts away from your day to day.
Glad my posts "trigger" you plenty so we can have these little talks, hope to see ya again soon. ;)

Cutie Cutie

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really like this. I'm sorry I can't say more.

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Legend of skyrift preview 8 Legend of skyrift preview 8

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Hey, I made you salty the last time I left a review, so I'll simplify it this time.

Princess Booblarge = Mary Sue

All male characters = stereotypes

Bellumart = permanently mediocre

I hope that's easier to digest

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BELLUMART responds:

Salty? You're the one that keeps coming back, you're not even on my fan list, took all the effort to write a novel sized nit-pick and i didn't even bother to give it a skim read.

I'm flattered you take so much time out of your day and give me the attention.

Hope i keep ya distracted enough from whatever pain ails ya.

Mwah, lub you.

Legend of skyrift preview 7 Legend of skyrift preview 7

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Right. So the artwork is alright. There's some things wrong with some of the details in the background.

I'd rather critique this from a writing and overall design standpoint. I know comics and books are something vastly different, but it doesn't excuse Mary-Sue characters and mediocre dialogue. The dialogue falls flat on it's face. and the woman screams Mary-Sue.

We'll call her princess Booblarge. So, when princess Booblarge suddenly changes her mind without any form of reasoning or depiction of an event that changes her mind, it raises a red flag for me. So too does the guy, who we'll call Dr. Manboy, with his swooning. I'm sure you could dismiss this as 'an anime thing' where storyline is botched for style over actual plot. But, like, no. Don't say that. I've seen good anime with good writing and good plots. Stop. No.

So right. Nothing would be better than you going out of your way to choreograph some sort of event that changes her mind. But if that's not plausible, something as simple as Manboy giving Booblarge a particular reason to let him follow her would work well enough. Maybe she wants to keep him around to eat his delicious blood and soul. Perhaps he has some sort of magical key, such as a surgeon in his family that can grant her breast reduction surgery at a discount. Maybe she's short on funds and he's dumb enough to give her his life savings to take him with her <i>Maybe she just likes him because he is cute to her.</i>

I would seriously prefer that.

I'm no color expert. In fact it's my weakest suit. But therein lies the problem: if I can spot it it's dead wrong. Your characters have much higher contrast than the background and I can't stop noticing how much I hate that.

BELLUMART responds:

I honestly stopped reading within the first few sentences, tl;dr. I'm just going receive this critique off the star rating.

Future issues will be more refined, so maybe we'll see a higher star rating later on.

Thanks for the feed back!

Making the Rounds Making the Rounds

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Tina looking fabulous AF


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JackDCurleo responds:

Thanks, buddy. Tina thrives in the madness of the modern era