Spedmallet's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pardon?]

I know that feel

Morthagg responds:

I think quite a few people might.

[Seeds of Despair]

Fuck man, good job.

Intense, but not creepy about it.

TheN0mad responds:

intensity is the spice of life ;P

[Element Explained: Fiia 1]

Bro, when are you writing the book or drawing the comic?

Seriously man. Seriously.

MarikBentusi responds:

It's actually based on a story (German tho) and I've been thinking about doing a comic one-off. Not sure if I'll be any good at it, but since people are (to my surprise) interested, I'm willing to give it a shot.

I did this multi-parter to gather some feedback like mentioned in the description.

[A Saviour in the Dark - page 1]

I don't think the guy below me follows that this is probably leading to the point where the woman turns around and sticks up for herself, like you imply in the comments.

My only complaint is that the man is excessively cruel and villainous- readers will sympathize with the female protagonist without the guy, say, ripping open a baby and drinking it's blood. I'd suggest toning it down a bit just to be less forced.

JMDeSantis responds:

Well, I won't say too much about the story, but Chadhiyana is not on this page and the title is "A Saviour in the Dark." Strangely, Newgrounds.com is the first website I've posted this on where the responses have been so strong to what is going on in the story. But it was always my intention to really hit people hard with this first page. At least the comments here are letting me know it did what I intended.

[Sonic]

Some things were NOT meant to be painted realistically

what have you done

JoshSummana responds:

Meh ... it needs too be done :P

[Captain Americat]

Not fat enough

SerPounce responds:

If I made him any fatter then his name would be Captain Vito.

Seriously, have you ever met someone named Vito that wasn't fat as fuck?

[Hobbitess]

You did a pretty good job on the coloring and backgrounds, I just wish you'd have taken the time to redo the limbs of the character.

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

Thanks for the fair review. I wish I had too. But I was lazy and didn't think I'd take the picture this far. Aha

[green eyes]

This isn't too bad, but it could definitely use some work. Foremost I really feel as though the front of the girl looks detached from the rest of the body. Another thing that bothers me is the general composition of the face; it looks more smushed together rather than at an angle. A few other nitpicks are; the shading seems off at the transition of back to butt(and in general in both those areas), the thighs are a bit too big and the entire waist area is off proportionally.

I think her left arm was done fairly well though.

immaboreddude responds:

THANKS for the observation i will upload it again with som fixes. XD

[Friendship?! Again?]

eh heh scorpion can't sell microwaves

this,k stinks

Saminat responds:

He decorates a killer cake though!

[Illdra]

Dark black is a bad idea; I had to tilt my head to the angle that the light was shining in my room to actually see any of the picture. I've read and heard that jet black is always a bad idea and should be replaced by a dark blue, and from what I've seen that's correct.

Overall this falls short compared to the other things you made that I looked at. Your use of black lines and very dark grey don't fit well with the black background; I had to double-take to see that you actually drew forelegs.

urzza-kangaa responds:

ah x3 so I guess we should deem it a failed experiment x3 I'll take that advice about the dark blue next time. thanks for the advice! have a killer weekend!