Spedmallet's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lollipop Chainsaw]

5/10. Not impressed because half your other stuff is fag bait.

Sabtastic responds:

Since I baited you does that make you a fag? :V olololol

[Shrek]

It looks like he's running towards me. Preparing my anus; it's all ogre now.

Smiledon responds:

Ha ha

[Manly Vincent]

Haha, sorry man but I'm really thinking feminine Vincent on this one

Eggabeg responds:

But-- but!! It was the 90's! long hair was still manly.. right? right!?

[''Ulterior Motives'']

cool a cyclops with mutated breasts

p.s. needs more light flare

Fatelogic responds:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mm8xRvoQkc0

You're welcome :D

[Zapdos & Flash]

Personally I've always dreamed of riding a zapdos into the sunset.

SteveFeane responds:

in theory it sounds awesome, yet i can't help but think that if that a real ride on zapdos would be pretty similar to the picture, aka terrifying lol

[Formal Zeal]

Honestly I don't feel as though the clothing is bad at all. I really feel as though the issue is a somewhat flat bodily proportion. It just seems very 2-d. The right arm (our left) begins with no depth, exactly like the other arm, while the forearm really doesn't match it. I also noticed the position of her right leg is very unnatural.

EmpirePhoenix responds:

Thank you for the comment!

I agree with your 1st point , i tried to draw a pose i never tried before this is literally the 1st time i ever drew something like that and so i don't quite get how to make it show depth yet.
but i did not notice the mismatch with the forearm it does look a bit weird doesn't it...

The leg however is another matter, the dress is the issue with it . I drew the dress from the stomach which covers the hips and makes it look like she has a smaller body which in turn makes the leg look too long and unnatural.
its a shame but i wanted to focus on the clothing more than anything.

i will do my best to improve in the future :D

[Jill Valentine - Revalations]

You've definitely improved a lot, which is pretty cool. Though those forelegs are way off, especially her right(our left). I'd like to see you submit some studies; maybe a portrait of a face without the style, or a still life or something.

bocodamondo responds:

yeah i had some troubles with the leg...
huh? i should do what? like a tutorial how i draw my stuff?

[Stolen "color"]

Woah, I totally just got he was stealing my time.

Mind has been blown.

deathink responds:

He is a jerk >:(