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Sonic of thrones Sonic of thrones

Rated 5 / 5 stars

true art



Xray Kombat ~ By Kehny Xray Kombat ~ By Kehny

Rated 5 / 5 stars

how the fuck did I miss this gem



Black Crystal - Episode Prologue: "Lighting the Spark" Black Crystal - Episode Prologue: "Lighting the Spark"

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Excellent work! Overall very impressive. It surely took you some time.

Now, if you will, some critique if you wish to hear it.

1. The pixelation bothers me. I have a feeling it wasn't so much as a style choice as it was a technique to reduce workload. It's fine, but I think it would have been just fine without it.

2.Some of the writing bothers me, particularly the slapstick parts. "Oh it's a shame you're not dead." "YEAH THANKS A LOT." "Now I'm gonna do something other than babysit you." "YEAH WHATEVER OLD MAN THANKS FOR NUTHIN."

It comes off as forced and a bit awkward. This is not the relationship a master and pupil would have. I feel as though you would get away with it if the voice actor was less serious and worded it more softly.

"You could have killed me!" "Hm-hm-hm.. that was the point." "WHAT?!"
"Now then... I should be off. Babysitting you is not the only task I have you see." "Oh please! I'm your star pupil and you know it."


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Coming Out Simulator Coming Out Simulator

Rated 5 / 5 stars

My feels


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Pokemon Beige Version Pokemon Beige Version

Rated 5 / 5 stars

The best version of pokemon yet


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Happy Thoughts Happy Thoughts

Rated 5 / 5 stars

please daddy we need you in our lives


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Whispers of Remembrance Whispers of Remembrance

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hey there. I've been listening to a lot of your work and I'm a pretty big fan. Looking forward to the next one.


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ChronoNomad responds:

Thanks a bunch, Spedmallet! Very cool to hear, and I appreciate the quick review. :D


Feminist PPG HIM Feminist PPG HIM

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Voice 1 is pretty bad. The only way I can really describe it is that it's a very bad impression of what kermit the frog/miss piggy would sound like as a drag queen

voice 2 is actually kind of funny lmao

Whether it's a voice acting flop or purposely bad, I just don't like it.


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What has the world become? What has the world become?

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

not sure if butthurt anti-trump tard or butthurt /pol/tard


thegamerlinkon responds:

Lol non of them, but you dont know what this is for soooo i dont care either.


FF7 Animation reference sheet Aeris body FF7 Animation reference sheet Aeris body

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hmm

The first thing I noticed was a male body on the back position and a male face on the front view. Though correct me if that was intentional as a rule 63.

If accident, the face is thrown off by a strong brow, and the back position has both a hunching arch to the neck and a male torso (the butt is where a person with a male skeleton would have it.)

This is what I mean: https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/9bd5aee2a8103fa9b88c8ac2aa02f71f


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JakkuZoltan responds:

That's really good feedback. The hunch in the neck was intentional on the right one. I don't really understand the male torso part on the right one. Are you saying the butt is too high, or the spine is too far out(or neither)? edit: Oh, I think I see. At least on the right one, are you saying the vertical perspective line for the back is further out than the butt?
It's not a surprise- I was thinking the whole time that there was something too masculine with the body.
edit 2: And the hips are too narrow on the left, right?

I'll be careful with the jaw and forehead, but I don't think it looks like a male face. Women can have those kinds of features.
Thank you for taking the time.
edit 3: I opened up the file again and have been taking a look at it. I decided I can justify the right one. Her pelvis is being bent forward- that was the intention. That's why the butt or hips can look to far in or whatever. Also, the left hip is being obscured by the left arm- so you're indicator for that is inaccurate. What I screwed up with was the neck, which is going too far, sort of ignoring the gesture I put down.
Let me know if missing or misunderstanding something.


Demon on a Swimsuit Demon on a Swimsuit

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Truly a masterpiece that future generations will look upon and know the greatness of our time.


Evil-Rick responds:

Hey! It's you again! It's been a while, how's the family? How are the kids?